12/9 6:45 p.m. From New York Times to Susan Ohanian: We are putting together a discussion on our online opinion forum, Room for Debate,
about stress among high school students. These discussions are meant to
be mini op-eds (about 300 words by a variety of experts addressing a
specific question.
Here's the question: A new documentary, "Race to Nowhere," is
hitting a nerve among parents across the country who are worried about
the levels of stress that their school-age children are experiencing: http://www.nytimes.com/2010/12/09/education/09nowhere.html?src=me&ref=homepage. What can schools -- and parents -- do to turn down the heat?
12/10 7:53 a.m. Room for Debate submission by Susan Ohanian
"Race to Nowhere" accurately portrays the heartbreaking stress
schools place on children. The fear of "not being good enough" now
begins with standardized requirements for Pre-K. Although the Times
review emphasized the pressure felt by suburban students preparing
their resumes for the Ivy League, a Vermont high schooler with an
Individualized Education Plan (IEP) wrote six pages of expletives on
his federally-required test.
You f_ _ _ ing a_ _holes.
I have been taking these f_ _ _ing tests since first grade and I
am f_ _ _ing sick of it. I know I can't spell. You know I can't spell.
I have more important things to do than this bulls_ _ _ test. . . .
This is a f_ _ _ing waste of time. You could spend this time teaching
me something.
Suspended for inappropriate behavior, this youth missed out on the
lumberjack test he'd planned to take the next day. The state of Vermont
owes him an apology for going along with federal mandates insisting
that one size fits all.
The pressure will get worse. The US Department of Education bribed
states to accept Common Core Standards and has dished out over $300
million for tests to accompany these standards. Wordsworth and Jane
Austen for all.
Parents and teachers must fight for childhood. Say "No!" to Barack
Obama, to Thomas Friedman, to Ben Bernanke, to Oprah, and to everybody
else who mouths nonsense about educating workers for the global
economy, trying to put the blame for our economic woes on the backs of
schoolchildren.
We need artists, bakers, lumberjacks, manicurists, welders, and
yurt builders, as well as people who study math and science in college.
Let's respect the variety of skills needed in our communities--"and make
sure everyone receives a decent wage. Talking about "Race to Nowhere"
is a good place to start.
Editorial Process: The Expletive Problem
1:35 p.m. New York Times to Susan: Unfortunately, I can't use your anecdote about the Vermont kid, so I've tried to rework the piece to make your point.
Edit: And although reviews of the film have emphasized the
pressure felt by suburban students preparing their resumes for the Ivy
League, they aren't the only ones affected by this obsession with
standardized testing. What about the high school student who doesn’t
want to go to college, who would like to be a lumberjack? Or what about
the kid who would rather be taking his truck driver's exam than being
forced to sit through another standardized test --the ones he's been
taking year after year since first grade? OR SOME SUCH
2:33 p.m. Susan to NY Times: I "fixed" the expletive
problem. I guess I can understand that a family newspaper has certain
issues, though I know that the student's words pull at heartstrings. I
read them at my Bank Street College Biber Lecture this fall (They bill
it as the annual lecture that sets the tone for the year).
Edit: And although reviews of the film have emphasized the
pressure felt by suburban students preparing their resumes for the Ivy
League, they aren't the only ones affected by this obsession with
standardized testing. What about the Vermont high school student who
filled his test booklet with six pages of rage at the one-size-fits all
test required by the federal government? When he was suspended for
"inappropriate behavior," he missed the lumberjack test he wanted to
take. I get hundreds of similar stories at my website from desperate
parents and grandparents.
3:49 NY Times Edit: What about the case of the
Vermont high school student who filled his test booklet with six pages
of rage at the one-size-fits all test required by the federal
government? When he was suspended for "inappropriate behavior," he
missed the lumberjack test he wanted to take. The state of Vermont owes
him an apology for going along with federal mandates that are a
disservice to our children.
The Thomas Friedman Problem
Original Text: Parents and teachers must fight for childhood.
Say "No!" to Barack Obama, to Thomas Friedman, to Ben Bernanke, to
Oprah, and to everybody else who mouths nonsense about educating
workers for the global economy, trying to put the blame for our
economic woes on the backs of schoolchildren.
1:35 New York Times Edit: Parents and teachers must
fight for childhood. Say “No!” to everybody who mouths this nonsense
about educating workers for the global economy, trying to put the blame
for our economic woes on the backs of schoolchildren.
2:33 p.m. Susan to NY Times: Why has this paragraph
been stripped of content? Saying "everybody" doesn't hold anyone
responsible. Is one not allowed to criticize the influential people who
mouth the global economy nonsense? I want the original paragraph back.
3:49 NY Times to Susan: Regarding your
penultimate paragraph, our feeling is that it seems odd to blame such a
large audience -- celebrities, etc. -- when the fault lies with the
policymakers and education experts, so hopefully you're okay with that
tweak, which goes back to most of your original wording.
NY Times Edit: Parents and teachers must fight
for childhood. Say "No!" to political leaders and education policy
experts who mouth this nonsense about educating workers for the global
economy, trying to put the blame for our economic woes on the backs of
schoolchildren.
7:17 p.m.: Susan to NY Times: I wrote a book called
Why Is Corporate America Bashing Our Public Schools,
detailing why the fault most definitely does NOT lie with education
experts. The current education policy was planned by the Business
Roundtable with help from politicos like Gov. Bill Clinton and IBM
chief Lou Gerstner. Obama has come late to the party, but he's there.
Thomas Friedman, for one, frequently orates about our economy depending
on schoolchildren taking college prep curriculum. And his words are
quoted by CEOs and politicos. I'm willing to take out Oprah, though
every teacher would know why her name is there.
Conclusion
That was the end over the exchange. I did not hear from anyone at the
New York Times again. A note on the editorial "we" (
our feeling is...) Writing on language in the
New York Times Magazine
(Oct. 3, 2010), Ben Zimmer says it is unlike that Mark Twain ever made
this remark often attributed to him: "Only kings, presidents, editors,
and people with tapeworms have the right to use the editorial 'we.'"
Over the course of the edits, the
New York Times removed the
suggestion that the state of Vermont should apologize to the high
school student and I Okayed it. When they substituted "truck drivers"
for "yurt builders," I pointed out that in that sentence yurt builders
represent a whole group of people who don't want to be standardized,
but I agreed to the change. When I stood firm on laying blame for
student anxiety at the feet of Obama, Friedman, and Bernanke (offering
to remove Oprah as a gesture of compromise), suddenly the
New York Times
reinstated the state of Vermont apology and the yurt builders. I
interpreted this as an attempt to get me to yield on Obama, Friedman,
and Bernanke "Give her back the yurt builders, so she'll shut up about
Friedman!"
Although the
New York Times initially addressed me as an
expert, in the end neither my research nor my opinion counted for a
hill of beans. Five people contributed to Room for Debate on Dec. 13,
2010, blaming student stress on a variety of things including AP
classes, homework, too many after-school activities. Nobody blames
Thomas Friedman.
I know that not one reader in 10,000 will understand the Friedman
sentence. And of those who do understand it, not one in 100,000 will
think I was right to destroy my chances of getting into the
New York Times by insisting on it. After all, doesn’t getting our words into the
New York Times
validate us as genuinely important? The problem is that I happen to
believe that op eds should increase public understanding of a
fundamental issue, not just preach to the orthodoxy of those who
already agree about some collateral damage. I wanted people to puzzle
over why Friedman's name is there. I hoped a few might even ask some
questions.
Most will think the
New York Times won. Maybe so. But I think their victory would have been bigger had I gone along with the offer to remove that sentence.